disturbed

give shape to story
please stab gently
castle lake red swirly
disturbed hard wild deadly
hot hypnotic cuts long
soft voluptuous squares crawl
like serene horrors
ostracized exteriors chorus
like smells in traffic
a confetti of dreams
descend like lodestones
lost to eternity

4 thoughts on “disturbed

  1. ?. Probably I will read it again after a long time, after I forget that I have read it, to see if I have got it correct. Kudos. When I was in college my note books used to be filled with such poems as the one above. Hmm… Those magic changes.

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